Before todays class I was talking to some students in the other streams and asked them how their work is going and their presentations seem to be focused on more empathy. Reflecting it with ours I thought that it might be good to adjust the script slightly so that we use less 'big word' and channel more empathy and personality into our presentation to make it more fun and exciting to listen to. I talked to Georgia and Hannah about this and they agreed. Simplifying the script also helped with the timing of the video and gave us more time for each section to read. Before showing Donald and Tristam for a practice presentation we did some final touches to the dossier and ran some print tests. We had a few issues with printing at first but got there in the end. The physical dossier looks good and we went through with a felt and highlighted all the little mistakes and adjustments that it needs before final print. Im glad that we print tested to see all the little nitty gritties and that we have plenty of time to fix them.
We did a practice presentation with Donald and Tristam separately. They both really enjoyed the penguins and script. There was one sentence that they pointed out as being quite bulky so we will fix that. There was a couple of other small critiques like Titles and credits and a backing track of some sort. Tristam mentioned maybe city sounds which we all thought was a great idea. These are things we will fix over the weekend. Todays final critique has been super helpful in picking out all the small things to fix and making our presentation and dossier the highest quality possible.
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