Today in class we spent the first half an hour going over our script and timing with the presentation video. Then we presented to Sky and Sarah first. They thought it was amazing and said they were doubtful that hi-fiving would be enough then they saw all the touchpoints too. They loved the video but their are some silent pauses in the script so work abit on timing the video. The next group we got was Katie, Sam and Lauren who said the same thing. We then show Donald. He also like it but wondered if the promo video is looking more like a presentation video which was interesting. So if this was to go further we would make the video more fast and upbeat.
We then thought we were brave enough for the shark tank. They loved it and said that it really shows through on how well we mesh as a team. They loved my dancing which is great. Mark says that he was hesitant if the Hi-fiving was enough but seeing all the design aspects is very successful. Some good critique from Tristam was also the pauses waiting for the next scene. Maybe the use of keynote would be better and there is a scene where there is one angle of people walking and maybe it needs a few more to keep it interesting. I also loved that Tristam said that the presentation is very successful because the script is split so that no one is left out. I thought that was a nice thing to mention. They concluded by saying that we had the best presentation so far which was an amazing feeling.
We will go away and work on these little critiques for Friday
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